Building a scene
Building a scene
The scene
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…Is a dramatic unit of larger work.
Moving the story forward
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Every scene should be, in some way, set up by
the previous scene, and should move the story forward for both the plot and the
development of the characters.
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Very scene sets up the next scene, until the
screenplay reaches its climax.
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This cause and effect relationship hooks in the
audience. Every scene should have a payoff – it is crucial – you can think of
this as being the:
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Rationale for the scene
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Its purpose
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Why is it needed in the screenplay
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What it reveals about the character and/ or the
plot
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The way it makes the audience curious about what
will happen next
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Constructing a scene
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Scenes should be made as tight as possible
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Guidelines for a scene construction
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A scene should be begun s close to its end as
possible
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It should increase either the drama or the
comedic effect
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It shouldn’t include anything superfluous –
anything that doesn’t matter
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A scene’s length should not run more than two
pages
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Action scenes should be contrasted with dialogue
scenes; heavy scenes with light scenes
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The audience need time to take a breath: varying
the texture of scenes affords them this
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Pacing
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As a writer builds towards the climax of the
screenplay, the pacing of scenesd should increase or decrease accordingly.
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Dramatic effectiveness
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What happens in the ecene that makes the
audience want to keep watching?
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It could be a revelation, a decision by one of
the characters, or even a cliff-hanger
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Dramatic tension keeps the viewer involved. Plot
twists are what keeps things interesting.
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Scenes should aim to keep an audience always
somewhat off balance, because this is what will keep them engaged
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This applied to dialogue based scenes
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Mood
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Each scene should convey a sense of the dominant
mood or emotion.
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This can be tied into a characters goal,
emotional state, and attitude at that particular moment.
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Trying what the character thinks and feels and
what he/she wants out of the particular unit of action the scene encompasses will
give the scene direction and dialogue subtext.
-SHOWING VS TELLING
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Avoid using talking heads to move the story
forward, for exposition of the plot, or even the backstory
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Always use visuals over straight dialogue.
Filmmaking’s strongest draw is what we see on screen, using strong visuals will
have greater impact.
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Conflict
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Some sort of conflict should always exist, even
in less dramatic scenes.
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The conflict can be subtle’; there should be
enough emotional subtext to make it interesting.
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Theme
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The theme is the subject of your story?
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What is the story really about?
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What is the idea that you keep thinking about in
your story?
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(E.g. bullying, loneliness, discrimination,
revenge).
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